Sea Breeze

By Dei

I dream                  
In the language of tragedy.
Of being intangible and furious.
Of racing relentlessly across the salted seas. Swirling viciously.

Reaching with wispy tendrils towards your pulsing throat
Of thunder CRASHING AND POUDING because I need you shattered!
I want you shaking in your rain drenched skin while I sweep your life away.
I want you bowed over gasping while I suck the soul from your lungs.
I want you standing, with your outstretched arms. BEGGING to soak in my electric sins.
I am drenching and drowning and tossing within my own chaos. RAGING
Engaging the world with my Heart boom crash shake and lonely once again
JUST LOOK AT ME!
Don’t you see? I’m elemental and fickle. WindWaterFireCrushCollisionFUCK!
I’m a H U R R I C A N E! … and I’m just chasing and begging
 
For you to hold me anyway

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Copyright 2013 Nefarious
Published on Thursday, April 11, 2013.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Number 3 in Sea-ries
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  • A former member wrote: Whew! I just completed the 3-part journey that is your "Sea-ries." I am definitely an enthusiast of seafaring adventures and I find your troika of sentimental poems to be quite seaworthy. Perhaps you can be convinced to author a Sea-quel?

  • Dei On Monday, July 14, 2014, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    i like the sound of that. The tides have certainly changed a great deal in the time since this posted

  • A former member wrote: sometimes some things in life leaves us shattered..as we expected a lot from those things..n when it vanished..we have nothing to look forward..its a beautiful description of such an event..thanks for sharing n take care..

  • A former member wrote: some storms are so inspiring so beautiful that one can only just stand and be entranced by its nature... this is one such storm.

  • Alchemist On Saturday, April 13, 2013, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    As beautiful and deadly as the poet that wrote it, I love the windwaterfirecrushfuck line.

  • Electric-Chair On Friday, April 12, 2013, Electric-Chair (121)By person wrote:

    scorn love, wanting more

  • A former member wrote: A shivering tale. Very well done!

  • FadedBlues On Friday, April 12, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...who can harness a hurricane like this? there is so much energy under the calm title...

  • Dei On Friday, April 12, 2013, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    You get it.

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