Comments by All Members
- "damn, this is brilliant. "analyze out condition with medicognition /my crystal ball tells me we're fake" -so well written and stunningly painful in it's veracity. it almost made me ashamed of my pink american eagle sweathshirt. =("
Posted by Unknown on "Crash out of the Fake" by VenomPlease
- "fukken fabulous...i love your voice. '...i bet theyre so proud of their pink american eagle sweaters...'---gawd i love ya. this makes me smile."
Posted by AniDayz on "Crash out of the Fake" by VenomPlease
- "ahhh...gawds...youve such a way, always---im left smiling in one way or another,in the wake of your fucking fabulous energy...i absolutely love this, and i agree, the last two lines---just brought this whole piece together...[im still smilin']"
Posted by AniDayz on "Green is not my best shade" by VenomPlease
- "h-h-holy shit! there is no way this would have worked without the last two lines.. i don't know it just like slammed it in, and made it work for me. Quite a rush. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Green is not my best shade" by VenomPlease
- "Very delicate to read - however I dont think the swearing in the first verse fits with the rest of the piece, it isn't aggressive enougth for that."
Posted by cyan9 on "It lingers" by VenomPlease
- "Wonderful. You always seem to create lovely images. Pure beauty. Amazing write."
Posted by K_Love on "Part two" by VenomPlease
- "this is a fucking amazing piece of poetry...i cannnot tell you how much i appreciate this...and i cant even think of anything to say. this blew me away."
Posted by AniDayz on "Prison Talk to Burn" by VenomPlease
- "damm how i have missed reading your words...this is fabulous,. the whole way in which you put it together...i love every bit of it."
Posted by AniDayz on "It lingers" by VenomPlease
- "-.'and if my shame could be adequately transformed into words i'd be a shakespearian masterpiece...but i am an inanimate object masquerading as a girl...'~excellent."
Posted by AniDayz on "It lingers" by VenomPlease
- "Wow this was raw and yet in a carefully pieced out kind of way. I can completely relate to this. Maybe we've been fishing with the wrong tackle or something. Hmm. Very much enjoyed. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "Prison Talk to Burn" by VenomPlease
- "dig your lingo , dig your feedom , cool piece , oddly crisp ... but the fact that you're speaking your own language actually transcended it ... love that .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Prison Talk to Burn" by VenomPlease
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