Crash out of the Fake

By VenomPlease

I could have given you everything
but everything's not what you need
You'd rather have nothing at all
as long as you weren't with me

I bet they're so proud of their pink American Eagle sweaters
and canned Deja Blue
They're such fools
and you are so differently foolish

I analyze out condition with medicognition
my crystal ball tells me we're fake

This smile is a weapon of mass illusion
"i love you" my method of mass confusion
Grab the meat cleaver and SWING
Hack off a hunk of flesh and bone
Accompany me in the mud
in the slop/ in a DAZE
I wanna be riding the same wave
with our minds in sync on the same page
connected on a loop of pain
Tie a bow around my migraine
and rip out my brain
Crash out of the fake

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© 2005 WhiteHorse
Published on Wednesday, November 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Equinox Asylum On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    My crystal ball tells me you can write. Thanx.

  • Equinox Asylum On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    I am canned in Deja blue.

  • elisa On Saturday, November 19, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    fake personality....bad.........fake tits.....good...j/k;)

  • A former member wrote: damn, this is brilliant. "analyze out condition with medicognition /my crystal ball tells me we're fake" -so well written and stunningly painful in it's veracity. it almost made me ashamed of my pink american eagle sweathshirt. =(

  • manywalks On Friday, November 18, 2005, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    ...suPERB...

  • AniDayz On Friday, November 18, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    fukken fabulous...i love your voice. '...i bet theyre so proud of their pink american eagle sweaters...'---gawd i love ya. this makes me smile.

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