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Green is not my best shade
By VenomPlease
I got bored during english class
I hope there's no blood on me
The kind that you can see
whenever she bleeds
ALL
OVER
THE
FLOOR
Wounds gaping
Throat aching
From where my purple handprints linger on her skin
like the bitch's gypsy necklaces
I am her personal noose... since knives are reserved for you
If I can't have you, no one can
IF I CAN'T HAVE YOU, NO ONE CAN
I'll show you just how far your
fallen angel's wings can span
Wide enough to block the sun and leave you
and your well-fed mistress in a famine
Leave you til the fat goes crazy
If you want me to stop
then you'll have to make me
MAKE ME
And maybe I'll have mercy
but I am NO ONE'S angel
Oh god, out of all the colors in the rainbow
Green is not my best shade
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© 2005 WhiteHorse
Published on Thursday, October 20, 2005.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Green is not my best shade"
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On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Equinox Asylum
(140)
wrote:
Bitter sweet rage. I am green with envy. Nice write.
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On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Wow this hit me like a sledge hammer.Wicked stuff.
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On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
green is my best.... but hell, this rocks - so emphatical, the words pound in my head, brilliant attitude. hell yeah. Thank you.
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
ahhh...gawds...youve such a way, always---im left smiling in one way or another,in the wake of your fucking fabulous energy...i absolutely love this, and i agree, the last two lines---just brought this whole piece together...[im still smilin']
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A former member wrote:
i agree..the last two lines brought this poem together beautifully. kick ass, this is.
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On Thursday, October 20, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
h-h-holy shit! there is no way this would have worked without the last two lines.. i don't know it just like slammed it in, and made it work for me. Quite a rush. ~b
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