I would burn for you
By VenomPlease
I'd like to join you in the fire
And melt into you
Until we are one
I would burn for you
Til flesh is warped and mixed with metallic plastic
I wish there was a way
Remembering
The touch of your mahogany
And rosewood fingerboard
Broken metal frets that tear my fingers apart
And slithers of steel that caress me with their thin touch
Remembering
All the nights you never let me down
And your glossy silk finish
How your body looked as you layed there on the floor
Casting shadows on the wall
From the 3am candle light
I'd like to join you in this fire
And melt into you
Until we are one
I would burn for you
I wish there was a way
For all I can do is hold you
While you turn my fingers black
And lay with you
As I dream of all the places you will take me
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Comments on "I would burn for you"
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A former member wrote:
I really like this and totally relate. I hope it works out better for you than me, but bang on for the poem. Best Regards, -Lost
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
This is well deserving of Poem of the Day. It's lovely and displays how far we will go for love.
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2005, suicidalsecrecy
(42) wrote:
simply put, an amazing creation. enough said. ~s.s.
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A former member wrote:
loved it, beatiful
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On Monday, February 14, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
acid bass mix magic... you are a poet priestess subversive dominatrix of another color... I love it, Seth
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
Love can make u truely crazy...I've been there. Oh what i'd do and hvae done... ~*Kitty*~
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
Very beautiful. The things we do for love. I know how that is. Good job.
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A former member wrote:
beautifully done.
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
nicely done.
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, Full blame
(28) wrote:
lovely imagery, the guitar one turned out to place the two bodies closely together. nice and complete
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On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, physicalgraffiti
(56) wrote:
...in fact...*fav button*
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On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, physicalgraffiti
(56) wrote:
damn. this is amazingly beautiful. wow. there really aren't many words to describe how awesome this poem is.