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It lingers
By VenomPlease
I love you
like the day is long
And the days around here
are pretty fucking long and restless
And they are
hot and humid
You can swim through the moisture in the air
And my if pain was a particle of condensation resting on
your skin then I would make rain
I would make floods that put the oceans to shame
And if my shame could be adequately transformed to words
I'd be a Shakespearian masterpiece
But I am an inanimate object masquerading as a girl
As a living thing that feels and breaths
And loves like the day is long
Feels shame that is thicker than blood
Blood that does not coarse through veins
But kept flowing by you at a deathfully slow rate
And this thing...
This thing that lingers over me
It never goes away
And it's for you
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Copyright 2005 WhiteHorse
Published on Monday, July 11, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "It lingers"
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On Friday, September 30, 2005, cyan9
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wrote:
Very delicate to read - however I dont think the swearing in the first verse fits with the rest of the piece, it isn't aggressive enougth for that.
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
damm how i have missed reading your words...this is fabulous,. the whole way in which you put it together...i love every bit of it.
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
-.'and if my shame could be adequately transformed into words i'd be a shakespearian masterpiece...but i am an inanimate object masquerading as a girl...'~excellent.
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On Tuesday, July 12, 2005, Doc
(145) wrote:
very nice ending
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