Comments by All Members
- "If only we could find it... Maybe we'd stop being so "anxious to consume". Neat write."
Posted by Unknown on "doldrums" by WhoIAM
- "Brings about that sensation for the yearning of childhood and the carefree existence and simple pleasures that go with it. The first line creates an interesting set-up and sets an almost wistful tone as if to say this is something that can be wished for but not achievable due to unspoken circumstances."
Posted by Unknown on "a beach" by WhoIAM
- "you have an exceptional voyeuristic quality to your writing. your work is incredibly insightful and worthwhile. thank you. it's been awhile, won't you give us more? "
Posted by disposable on "delierious contentment" by WhoIAM
- "i can't believe i havent been here before now. you commented on a work of mine some time ago and it made me curious but apparently not enough to look you up. i saw you again, by happenstance, and decided to look you up. so here i am. and here i'll stay! i've read this work (amazing btw) and im not stopping any time soon-you had me at "after". :) write on..."
Posted by disposable on "the first words of the day." by WhoIAM
- "you are most welcome. come to think of it, im pretty sure you are one of the first to read me when i joined, so thank to you as well. my mind is still here i guess. ;)
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Posted by blue on "the first words of the day." by WhoIAM
- "Oh my where have you been? Here is another outstanding write. I'm going to take my time reading Ur poetry because it's wonderful. Again where the hell are all the comments for this one? It's too awesome to overlook without leaving a tidbit. ^o^ "
Posted by Revisable Retina on "the pianist across the street" by WhoIAM
- "I can't believe people haven't praised this piece with a ton of comments.
This is amazing. I love metaphoric writes pertaining, to the ups and downs life throws at each and everyone of us.
-Bravo-"
Posted by Revisable Retina on "delierious contentment" by WhoIAM
- "I was immediately attracted to the title of this poem. A very strong opening. As for the rest, it's quite a nice extended simile. It is the struggle, as hard as it often is, that makes life great, makes it interesting and worth living. Very nice."
Posted by wilted on "delierious contentment" by WhoIAM
- "ironic *poem....p-oem ya duzzlewit *slaps useless fingers*....amen to the journal. Everything I write is on paper first...always. And all my existing poetry is in email drafts in case this particular computer every decides to wither and die and deprive me of my lazy lifestyle! I'LL KILL IT AGAIN!!! Cool. :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "why computers have nothing on a moleskin journal." by WhoIAM
- "I like the feeling your words give me, soothing atmosphere...I have also read "tuesday",and while reading I could perfectly picture the people in it.It is just a very heartwarming read,thank you.*smoking and drinking coffee*:)"
Posted by estherbell on "ode to a habit" by WhoIAM
- "sex is irrelevant. that is why i did not comment on it. unity and commitment are as ephemeral as anything else. cherish it while it is there. whether it is destined to end in a matter of a days, or last forever."
Posted by WhoIAM on "Everyone Gets a Star" by WhoIAM
- "Wow, excellent story, but I am so not able to fathom the mindset. Its just outside my understanding. For me, sex, without the unity of love and commitment, is pretty close to zero. Still, if you're happy with it, more power to Ya. At least you're happy."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Everyone Gets a Star" by WhoIAM
- "Random thought poetry is the best poetry I ever heard, though it's probably not a real classification. This one is good. Reminds me of drinking by a beach with murmurs in bars and bleak concrete light posts repeating themselves on every street. You're always a good read."
Posted by Unknown on "sleep walk cooking dream dance sitting" by WhoIAM
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