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doldrums
By WhoIAM
the parking lots are filled to capacity
and everyone is walking down the aisles
in trances
anxious to consume.
impulse buys gleam
generic music
advertisments show off
automatic doors.
greeters.
florescent lighting.
people are queued at the registers
(...beep
..beep
.....beep)
overflowing carts.
everyone came for one thing.
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Copyright 2004 WhoIAM
Published on Monday, November 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
If only we could find it... Maybe we'd stop being so "anxious to consume". Neat write.
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On Sunday, November 11, 2007, WhoIAM
(27)
wrote:
you tease
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On Tuesday, October 30, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
is this the holiday season? let's get hopped up on the 'nog and sing out of key christmas carols. :) joking, of course.
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
amen.
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
i agree with solace, your writes all appear to be classy.. I liked the ending to this.. sometimes its better to have less/you'll always have more. great write once again
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Yup. Really Great Write. And Your Style!!! What A Way To Write. GPhD.
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On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I like your style, it's strangely classy in an underhand way...I'm enjoying your works...Continue :)
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