the first words of the day.
By WhoIAM
after a long night
touring the city
drinking under barroom lights
my first words the next day
are often jibberish.
a hangover speaking
more so then the wind produced
from my lungs
after a long night
of relaxing
reading books perhaps
the first words i utter
in the morning
are average
clear and composed
cheerfully mundane
after a long night
of engaging conversation and sex
being woken
by the morning
my first words
are often nothings,
"beautiful alarm clock you have there"
or something of that nature.
i hardly ever notice the first words
i manage to belt out
on any given day.
who does?
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© 2008 WhoIAM
Published on Friday, October 31, 2008.
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On Tuesday, May 5, 2009, disposable
(103) wrote:
i can't believe i havent been here before now. you commented on a work of mine some time ago and it made me curious but apparently not enough to look you up. i saw you again, by happenstance, and decided to look you up. so here i am. and here i'll stay! i've read this work (amazing btw) and im not stopping any time soon-you had me at "after". :) write on...
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2009, Mari
(419) wrote:
i've never ever ever... had a hang-over.
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On Friday, October 31, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
haha.... funny how that happens... i liked the definitive and blatant shift in actions and the morning reactions though... i'm still giggling...
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On Friday, October 31, 2008, WhoIAM
(27) wrote:
its was and thanks :)
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On Friday, October 31, 2008, blue
(1409) wrote:
you are most welcome. come to think of it, im pretty sure you are one of the first to read me when i joined, so thank to you as well. my mind is still here i guess. ;)
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On Friday, October 31, 2008, blue
(1409) wrote:
heh. not sure if it was your intent, but i found this quite amusing. Welcome back, i haven't read of you in some time. ~b