Comments by All Members
- ""Tears shed don't bring back the dead, and some hurts can never be undone." So very, very true. Powerful poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Left Behind" by Kali Ma
- "This was amazing, the way you clearly tell how you lost the gift. The past and present are so described that the future is explained very bleakly. Awesome Write"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Supressed" by Kali Ma
- "This has a powerful ending and "til I forget we once ran as one" is a great line. Nice to see you posting, but the implications of this piece are disheartening. ~T"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Left Behind" by Kali Ma
- "I think it doesn't matter are you a goth or not - these day everyone calls himself a gothic, so why not you, too? The old values have vanished yet, anyway"
Posted by Unknown on "Can You Tell I'm Gothic?" by Kali Ma
- "its always nice to hear from you. or read from you, as the case may be. but damn do i hate Gods "pity". ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "A Woman's Pain" by Kali Ma
- "and for all these reasons God can suck my phantom dick.....then take his pity and shove it up Adams ass:) nice write."
Posted by elisa on "A Woman's Pain" by Kali Ma
- "ah, wicked. This was great, love the flow*haha* And the theme, all went well...and i curse the curse passed onto us ;p"
Posted by Possesion on "A Woman's Pain" by Kali Ma
- "wonderfully constructed, etched with painful beauty...the flow of this write is incredibly masterful...it is absolutely beautiful."
Posted by AniDayz on "Valley of the Dead" by Kali Ma
- "haha... i liked this... sounds like something i wrote when i was venting and everybody started attacking me without thinking. i like this though!"
Posted by Unknown on "Can You Tell I'm Gothic?" by Kali Ma
- "This poem is being satirical about goths, however when I actually wrote this poem (it was a while back) I was "goth". So, I suppose I was making fun of myself. I don't know if that makes sense at all, but this is the outcome to clear up any doubts. ~ As"
Posted by Kali Ma on "Can You Tell I'm Gothic?" by Kali Ma
- "I guess people are confused at this write and maybe I am too, but I read it as you being sarcastic and that's how it came across to me, it was a pretty funny write."
Posted by K_Love on "Can You Tell I'm Gothic?" by Kali Ma
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