All That Is Left Is Memories
By Kali Ma
White petals drift unnoticed to the chill marble floor
of the dark halls of my troubled mind.
Withered innocence lingers like smothering incense,
choking off all unshed tears, glimmering.
All that is left of the past is memories:
bittersweet and full of cloudy remorse.
Broken ties cut apart as parting ribbons,
lying trampled upon by countless feet;
kicked aside and spat upon.
Disgraced thoughts huddle ashamed
stricken with a thousand words unmeant
and little white lies dug to deep: infected.
I'm swept too fast as season's pass,
lost in the maelstorm of life,
"Things fall apart, the centre cannot hold." (1)
All that was once strong shall crumble,
to lie in dust and blacken once pure petals
of a friendship long since departed, yet never forgotten.
(1) Quote from W.B Yeats "The Second Coming"
*** In memory of a friendship missed dearly. ***
Comments on "All That Is Left Is Memories"
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On Monday, October 10, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
Ah, clouded remorse. Very vivid indeed; I wonder why I never mentioned anything ealier. This one's a keeper! ~T~
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
I know what it's like to lose a friendship. I miss it dearly myself. So, I know how it feels. If you need a friend or just someone to talk to, please do.
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
You really painted the whole picture in my mind. Very well written.
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On Monday, November 22, 2004, Litteratus
(42) wrote:
well-written and strong with vivid imagery.
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On Monday, November 22, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Nicely done indeed - some lovely use of language in an effective, reflective piece... [sorry about the rhyme there! Not intentional. >:)] welcome to dp.
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A former member wrote:
I think this was quite beautiful. Love the wording... Great job!