Shattered Smiles

By Kali Ma

I remember how you once told me
That my smiles were so lovely.

I blushed and shrugged embarrasingly
And you let the matter drop.

But I have to tell you now the truth -
That my smiles are only for your eyes.

You bring out the sunshine in the darkest nights
And fill me with a warmth of a thousand suns.

You sweep away all my depression
The moment I lay eyes on you.

But when you leave it's like an eclipse,
The sun's light murdered by the night.

And lonely tears and aching sobs
Shatter my smiles every time you go.

Leaving me broken and needing
And my heart bleeding.

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Copyright 2004 Kali Ma
Published on Thursday, December 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, November 8, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Sounds intence

  • Silent Assassin On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    I know that pain all too well. I hate it. So much I do. Very well written.

  • A former member wrote: hope to invoke those feelings in someone again...very touching

  • Rone4611 On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    wow, this is really good. a really happy but, a sort of morbid happy... The 6th stanza is my favorite! Good write

  • AniDayz On Thursday, December 16, 2004, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    beautifully written,your words are painted so well here. sad...but real and i like it very much. well done.

  • Butterfly On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    I feel like this everytime I see my fiance. I hate leaving him everyday. Hell I hate leaving to go to the next room away from him. Beautifully written. I liked the flow too. Very nice.

  • A former member wrote: thats so sweet.

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