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Shattered Smiles
By Kali Ma
I remember how you once told me
That my smiles were so lovely.
I blushed and shrugged embarrasingly
And you let the matter drop.
But I have to tell you now the truth -
That my smiles are only for your eyes.
You bring out the sunshine in the darkest nights
And fill me with a warmth of a thousand suns.
You sweep away all my depression
The moment I lay eyes on you.
But when you leave it's like an eclipse,
The sun's light murdered by the night.
And lonely tears and aching sobs
Shatter my smiles every time you go.
Leaving me broken and needing
And my heart bleeding.
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Copyright 2004 Kali Ma
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On Tuesday, November 8, 2005, Dancing_Monkey
(1246)
wrote:
Sounds intence
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
I know that pain all too well. I hate it. So much I do. Very well written.
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A former member wrote:
hope to invoke those feelings in someone again...very touching
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
wow, this is really good. a really happy but, a sort of morbid happy... The 6th stanza is my favorite! Good write
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
beautifully written,your words are painted so well here. sad...but real and i like it very much. well done.
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
I feel like this everytime I see my fiance. I hate leaving him everyday. Hell I hate leaving to go to the next room away from him. Beautifully written. I liked the flow too. Very nice.
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A former member wrote:
thats so sweet.
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