Comments by All Members
- "That's a concise outpouring and much understood...I hate that feeling where you can't shake the mood of a dream and it follows you around casting a pall over everything..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "I Dreamt Of Her" by SirEnders
- "The poet has methodically arranged
After taking sincere pains to create
I am greatly awed by the rhyme
That contains good meaning also.
mvvenkataraman"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Live in Death" by SirEnders
- "WOW.... is all I really have to say... that was dark and personal. I can't even imagine what all you went through but I appreciate you sharing your story with us. Very nice dark piece. Good luck! - 10:43"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "The Dark Story" by SirEnders
- "I really enjoy the phrase "killing field". The poem in general is great and is really set up from that point. The twist of making death seem as a friend dampens the mood back down to spookyness."
Posted by Iron Blood Orphan on "Death Found Me" by SirEnders
- "Thank you for the feedback, I really enjoy when people help me out with that. Thank you for reading, I'll work on my rhythm. Look out for my next work!"
Posted by SirEnders on "Deaths Beginning" by SirEnders
- "I really enjoyed this. A very interesting way to show Death. The cloak and sickle gets old. Well done"
Posted by Allen on "Deaths Beginning" by SirEnders
- "Quite an image you've painted with a very creative scene. You are well on your way to becoming a wonderful post :-). My only critique is to work on your rhythm in wording so it's easier to read and flows more naturally. You've done it in several spots but not in all so that many a start. Again, wonderful write. "
Posted by sIo on "Deaths Beginning" by SirEnders
- "Jesus, talk about your classic refrain. It's all there, replete with tones of Longfellow, Keats, or Byron. Impressive write. "
Posted by Adagios on "And Death Said" by SirEnders
- "I can see why this must of been such a buzz to write.."All the greatest people were betrayed"..killer line...then everything from "I miss when we would run.." spins the poem on its head and suddenly the reason for your deep depression becomes crystal clear. Great piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "She Is My Dream" by SirEnders
- "You commented quick, I appreciate you reading. If you ever have any requests/ideas, just let me know."
Posted by SirEnders on "Memoriam" by SirEnders
- "How many times can I say to you well done? Amazing? Great piece? It seems quite often. So beautiful and sad. 💚"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Memoriam" by SirEnders
- "Wow! Again I see what Willow likes your poems. So many times I have heard her say "I welcome death sister. I won't suffer anymore.". Great piece"
Posted by Karebear on "I Welcome Death" by SirEnders
- "As I've told a few people here I am new to the site. My friend Willow (Willow Wept) brought me here. She speaks highly of your writing. I see why now after reading a few of them. Your writings are similar in some ways. She recommended this poem of yours first. It is an awesome poem. "
Posted by Karebear on "As I Kneel To Death" by SirEnders
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