Comments by All Members
- "Thank you very much, its a great compliment coming from the author of Green fire :D its one of my all time favorites to date"
Posted by Asura on "Translucid" by Asura
- "This was very cleverly worded. Had a very original feel to it as well. Eloquent and very well written."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Translucid" by Asura
- "This is the first Fallout poem I've ever read. Excellent. The gray seeping in is why I can't bear to play it. Being stuck in a vault with all the personalities and agendas...that would be a greater hell than becoming the incinerated shadow on a wall. Well done."
Posted by syzygy on "Fallout" by Asura
- "I love how you incorporate the iconic purity of the white rose, and co-mingle it with the hush-hush topic of suicide. A beautiful, interwoven ode to the lost purity of love and the devastating fallout. Bravo, my friend. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "suicide on white rose petals" by Asura
- "History always repeats itself, no matter how goddamn hard we try. "Carnal dereliction". Wow, great mention of one of humanity's most basic instincts. A round of applause for you, my dear. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Crimson dream " by Asura
- "When people are at their wit's end, they turn to whatever God that gives them solace, it's a way to avoid the pain and to not contemplate the unthinkable. A brutally honest depiction of the proverbial last hope. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "chemicals collide" by Asura
- "This has a nice parallel quality to it. At first, the reader thinks that you're talking about a lost love, but is jerked back to reality when they realize what you're really missing is your true self. I must take a bow to you now. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "night by night" by Asura
- "I really like how you can tackle the tough subjects, and not many people can do that. Once again, very nice depiction of our eventual downfall. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Tainted" by Asura
- "I'm feeling a sort of circle of life theme going on here. All of the uncertainty, and the beauty's real Nature being revealed. Bravo, baby. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Fallout" by Asura
- "A very rich commentary on love and all of the emotions that come with it. I felt the tears fall on my face, and felt the ache. Very well done, my love. Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Tears..." by Asura
- "What a nice, small, painful piece. It's simple, but not dumb, and it feels honest in a way that enhances the melancholy. Great use of imagery, as well. Good poem."
Posted by Queazenart on "suicide on white rose petals" by Asura
- "Enjoyed the rapid fire, staccato-like rhythm of your rhymed couplets here Asura. "Hemoplague" was a show stopper - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Crimson dream " by Asura
- "jesus but that is smooth, i agree completely with lyn. this is just perfect grace. solid work"
Posted by Adagios on "chemicals collide" by Asura
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Damn, this has such a smooth & powerful flow to it; it almost makes suicide appear glamorous! ... I'm jealous, but more so in a poetic way ... Excellent ink! ... Devlin.
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Posted by Devil lyn on "chemicals collide" by Asura
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