Crimson dream

By Asura

Feeling suicidal
Deadly. Standing idle.
Dreams are getting vague,
Dreams of hemoplague,
Crimson red addiction,
Carnal dereliction,
Hunting. Homicidal
Sanguine revival
Thirst being fulfilled,
Crimson fire spilled,
Sickness going viral
Unholy survival
Genocide complete,
Stop, and then repeat.

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Published on Friday, December 16, 2016. Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Crimson dream "

A former member wrote: History always repeats itself, no matter how goddamn hard we try. "Carnal dereliction". Wow, great mention of one of humanity's most basic instincts. A round of applause for you, my dear. Reb:).
On Saturday, December 17, 2016, Adagios (716) wrote:

Absolutely, rapid, intense, but laden with meaning. Excellent
On Tuesday, December 27, 2016, Asura (15) wrote:

I apreciate it, thank you..
On Friday, December 16, 2016, dwells (4177) wrote:

Enjoyed the rapid fire, staccato-like rhythm of your rhymed couplets here Asura. "Hemoplague" was a show stopper - cheers! - Dan
On Saturday, December 17, 2016, Asura (15) wrote:

I am glad you enjoyed it Dan, thank you!