Comments by All Members
- "I believe you've captured the frantic feelings of anxiety rather well. The imagery kept me on task reading it. Just a small grammatical critique, it should read "peeked inside" not peaked. Overall, a well written poem."
Posted by Sockpuppet on "Static" by lshidonil
- "These days it takes a lot to cause me to comment on a creation of truth...so truly thank you...every letter that formed a syllable in turn forming the word resonated with beautiful vibrations shaking the breathing shadows swimming in the breaks of my souls waves...spiritually described leaving the truth seen on the stage of life awaiting the next scene...*silent standing ovation*...thanks for sharing...knight"
Posted by knightmirror on "World of Dust" by lshidonil
- "Many of us are our worst enemies. I know I am. I'm surrounded by good people. Even found love. Why I still feel like a shit stain in the middle of a pearly white sheet is beyond me. I tried a mirror image poem a while back. It did NOT capture what this poem captures. Well done. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Fragments of the Shattered Mirror" by lshidonil
- "Brilliant in its simplicity. This piece is clear, concise, poignant, and relatable. Great job. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Queazenart on "Nightmare" by lshidonil
- "I like this. It's heartfelt, to say the least, and reminds me of highschool. Bittersweet, but mostly bitter. The transition from talking about stars in the dark to the eyes of someone else is beautiful, as is that entire fourth from the end stanza. That is a sentiment that strikes close to the heart for me. Great job. I look forward to more. "
Posted by Queazenart on "World of Dust" by lshidonil
- "your easy pacing is like warm brandy going down the throat. beautiful. funny, recently ive taken to doing just that, standing with futility in a crowd, wishing for a certain someone in it, always leaving feeling empty and a little foolish. bravo, great write. "
Posted by Adagios on "World of Dust" by lshidonil
- "This is really well worded. It's not overdone, and somehow manages to be both beautiful with a somewhat casual tone. That's kind of difficult to accomplish, so kudos."
Posted by WillowGreybird on "I Miss Her" by lshidonil
- "Been there sometimes you forget how to exist with out the torment and pain that your lover brings. This is why we are called Masochists .... we have unique needs. Great write. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by Unknown on "I Miss Her" by lshidonil
- "Relationships can be frustrating and suffocating sometimes trust me been with my husband 17 years and I'm nearly 30 lol but it doesn't change how I feel about him. Great write "
Posted by Unknown on "Fire and Ice" by lshidonil
- "Truth is, no one can be saved unless they're looking to be. My favorite stanza is the second to last one, absolutely beautiful. "
Posted by Unknown on "Agony's Lullaby" by lshidonil
- "Yet, you cannot have the good without the bad. That is the shadows. If you turn and face the sun, your shadow falls behind you."
Posted by lshidonil on "Agony's Lullaby" by lshidonil
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