Comments by All Members
- "Good to see you still haven't lost that song vibe. Glad to see some new stuff from you man. "The knowledge of the sun got washed away, like a thief in the night the serpent took the reins" that is gold right there. Well written brother."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "I can hear the tide in this as the moon controls the water that is mankind. Very much enjoyed. "
Posted by Quill on "M00n matrix" by molock
- "Wow....So...The repeated question of where does time go really hit me. Then you floored me at the end. My heart just dropped a bit. I was awestruck and sad at the same time. So much feeling in this. I love it!💚💚💚"
Posted by Willow Wept on "i guess this is goodbye" by molock
- "One from the heart my brother, and the whiskey dreams that always disappoint. I finally got it right on the second go-around. Cheers friend - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "i guess this is goodbye" by molock
- "My first thought...So sweet! My second are my husband's words to me.."You're an angel when you sleep or maybe that's just when the horns holding up your broken halo go back in." Beautiful work.💚"
Posted by Willow Wept on "why me?" by molock
- "thanks Drea, this is for my soulmate this Oct. will be 20yrs, i'm truly blessed. I look forward to your next post, later my dear - mo"
Posted by molock on "why me?" by molock
- "yeah, it's about my little sweetheart. it's my get out of jail free card, if i'm in trouble I write something for her, then she'll get a little mushy. sometimes it doesn't work though, lol. hey you guys are always in my prayers. peace"
Posted by molock on "why me?" by molock
- "Haha, I don't think i'm that brave. thanks as always for kind words. later - mo"
Posted by molock on "why me?" by molock
- "thanks CJ for the positive vibe, although I like traditional rap when it come's to the genre I tend to lean more towards an alternative style - kid rock, everlast, hed pe kotton mouth kings, slightly stupid but my true love is rock guitars ever since I heard led zeppelin for the fist time. that being said I wrote this because of a video I saw that suggested Eminem died in a car crash 2006 so I kinda went with that notion. by the way my dumb ass forgot to put the chorus in when you read it, so I edited it today. anyway thanks for reading and commenting. peace - mo"
Posted by molock on "seein' double (a tribute to the real slim shady)" by molock
- "I have to be honest, i'm not a huge rap fan but I came across a video that suggested that Emimen died in a car crash in 2006 then they replaced him with a double. i'm with you on the mainstream media I don't watch the news I don't even own a tv i use my computer for music reading and writing, speaking of writing thanks for the typo alert ironic I should fancy writing seeing how I think I was the worst speller in the history of my school lol. be well my dear and thanks for droppin' by - mo"
Posted by molock on "seein' double (a tribute to the real slim shady)" by molock
- "thanks man, i'm not really a rap fan aside from a few tracs here and there but I came across a video on youtube that suggested that in 2006 Eminem died in a car crash and they replaced him with a double and there was a news release in 2006 that said he died in a car crash but it was quickly retracted so I thought I would embellish on that notion. brother it's always good to hear from you, I think about you guys quite often. cheers bro - later"
Posted by molock on "seein' double (a tribute to the real slim shady)" by molock
- "Terrifically tender, and do not wake the sleeping she-bear Mo (at your own peril). A dreamy poem for a perfect peach. Peace and cheers my friend! - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "why me?" by molock
- "May I assume this is about your lovely lady? I would have to think when she reads your work that it brings tears to her eyes. And, yes, why not you?"
Posted by Damien on "why me?" by molock
- "Wow. It's been at least 15 years since I've even said his name. .laughs. I'm so outta touch with news feed and media with any star or celeb. I'll stick to what I know, writing and drawing, everything else is alien to me. Great flipping piece all together. Nice structure and tone. There's a bit of word confusion above 'steel' should be 'steal' --above all, you rocked this. .bows. "
Posted by soul_versing on "seein' double (a tribute to the real slim shady)" by molock
- "I agree with Kaiser, this has a song vibe to it. I love the way you tied all of it together with the "Creep...." and "Sleep...." "
Posted by Drea on "Splinter" by molock
- "Love is painful. It causes some of the worst pain, but we hold on. We try and try. This hurt. I'm sorry you had to feel this. "
Posted by Drea on "Cumbersome disguise" by molock
- "This truly would make a great song. I got this feel good song vibe. I agree with Kaiser this would sound great played with an acoustic guitar. Write on. "
Posted by Drea on "Last call for Memphis" by molock
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