Comments by All Members
- "Knowledge and self determination...? One life and no god to cleanse our miscreant deeds in some great beyond...? To sieze the day in a way that makes the world a better place...? This piece is brilliant and raised gooseflesh. Forever is now. Utopia isn't anything unless it's in the here and now birthed by the immediacy of unassuming love that demands no repayment or interest and keeps no ledgers.
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Posted by Jonas on "Malum" by Nimue44
- "This morning i woke and decided i wanted to read some poems. Thank you for giving one. It was good "
Posted by Allen on "Star Wreck" by Nimue44
- "I love this piece. Maddening. Like that feeling towards someone that makes you grind your teeth and clench your fists because you can't stop thinking about them and you know you don't want to. Much respect. "
Posted by LeadAndSway on "Star Wreck" by Nimue44
- "Oh... humans and what they're capable of... This is beautiful, your style is truly unique, how the rhythm was set, the pace, the melody... astonishing, well done, as always. "
Posted by heinzlet on "The Daring" by Nimue44
- "Very trippy piece! I liked the notion of how glass distorts what you are looking at, and the device of the car ride and looking through the windows. Nice! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Let Jackdaw Fly" by Nimue44
- ""You brought me the darkness.
Time to harvest what you sowed." - excellent finish to this piece. I like the rhythm to this one. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Daring" by Nimue44
- "the strange solitary voice you are left with..the inner voice, consumed in turmoil, sweeping ashes...remind me of being in front of a vending machine at 2am, not sure what to get, mulling in nothing because you're tired...interesting structure, i always love the use of multiple voices in a poem and i think you did it well here! thanks for writing ♡ "
Posted by Unknown on "Ashes" by Nimue44
- "That phrase has inspired me since you wrote it. I like theological conflicts and I like to believe that creating is what makes us divine. "
Posted by Nimue44 on "Carmine" by Nimue44
- "This is just outstanding, one of the best imagery I've seen so far, the whole concept and message is just so unmistakably discernible. I enjoyed it."
Posted by heinzlet on "Malum" by Nimue44
- "The deepest of us will relive the final cut over and over. That is they way of things. Choosing to create rather than destroy is what makes us divine!"
Posted by Flying indigo express on "Carmine" by Nimue44
- "Not just an image. But an abstract concept of "being" that calls away from the moment to moment distraction. Realizing the truth....whatever that means to each "
Posted by Flying indigo express on "Malum" by Nimue44
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