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  • "I like the last stanza the best. It reallly pulls the peice together. It's an amazing piece regardless. You can really feel the sorrow and the pain, but also the toxic love in this. Excellent. Brava!!"
    Posted by Ladyhawke on "My bowl of ashes" by ashottothetemple
  • "I'm going to have to agree with miss K_Love on this one. You speak as I think, but I could never say the words. All a big flow of emotional truth this seems like, and not hiding behind a million poetic metaphors and images. This is raw and yet poetic for the form and flow that you always capture. Reading this, I can tell you that You did tell me, and I do believe you. One hell of a love expressed here, and I do love that title. Write on..."
    Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on ""You-Wouldn't-Believe-Me-If-I-Told-You" =kind of love" by ashottothetemple
  • "I love it, and this is certainly a feeling I know. I'm feeling that random repetition and just the fluid tone of the piece, so sincere and real, "It's all good, I can break away, And leave more For you to love." Fucking hell every poem is a new ride entirely with you, but always in an exciting car, always a thrill. Write on..."
    Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Fragile )(Its okay to break me)(" by ashottothetemple
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