"You-Wouldn't-Believe-Me-If-I-Told-You" =kind of love

By ashottothetemple

If I wake up tomorrow
And this were all a dream
I’d hope to wake with a smile
In respects to your kindness
Quirky, silly and so oftenly unique
Still innocent but with a Grade ‘A’ twist
Refuse to get your moan
From between my ears
You haunt my dreams
Create a new dialogue
Sort of like the sound
Of rain on my heart
Or to go as far as to say
Everything is okay when we articulate
Just imagine what kind of hell
The world is in for
When we get set loose
And finally we have no chains
Broken free I will follow you
To the ends of the Earth
Holding your hand as we run
Making your pleasure my routine
Holding your head up so tears fall
Upon my tattered hAnds/shOUldEr/heart
Thanking whatever fate may be
That I got to you in time
Exactly the right words will
ALWAYS come to my lips
Exactly the right timing
Kissing your lips that made my knees
Liquefy and crumble at once
One look was all it took
I was hooked
I got dosed: you’re my drug
I felt that sense again
The one that told me all about
The looks you give me
The signs you send me
That tell me you want me
They tell me you need me
Convincing me
That you’re
In love with me
And I should never
Have fear again
For your touch is all I will ever need
Like I said, I’m hooked and
There’s no cure for your smile
So I will simply beg
For the strength to hold you
Even when I’m falling apart
And my insides melt away
Because your touch is so warm
Damn it!
It’s so calming to hear you
So surreal to see you
Unrequited love overpowers
When you laugh
When I make you blush
I bet you feel low when
My voice isn’t on the other end
Or when it’s not me that said “Ello”
Shhhh dearest no one can hear us
But we might get caught
We could be killed
But Death’s Kiss is a mere PRICK
Second to your eyes and soft skin
There could be a SOLUTION
There could be a FIX
Quick! Run with me!
We can out jump the train
Only promise not to get framed
Don’t get caught
Just promise you’ll stay
Hold my hand and we can fly
Hell is a memory, long goodbye
We’re gone now, ran fast::out of breath
Take me to heaven
In just another boxcar
I’d gladly hold you
Until we get there
I saved you, so you stayed
And I prayed for strength …
Anything to carry you home
Thanks again for the life
You slipped into my lungs
The air cleared my heart
And all I felt was you,
Never letting go
The time has come
We can fly away
We can finally=]=]=]
Catch up, the world stopped turning
Stopped just for us
Caught my breathe just in time
To take yours away
All it took was my LIPS
Softly pressed to your FLESH
Take one look, angelic beauty
This is the last you’ll see of Hell
It’s still so distant, we’ll never go back!
And Float
Float
Float Float
As fast and as far as we can
Entwined/We are one
Like we shared it all along
Almost blind from your passion
I smiled myself to sleep last night
In hopes that my dreams would
ManifesT and MaterializE
Alas, I awoke
And the bed had been untouched
The Hell we were in existed
It surrounded us both
s.e.p.e.r.a.t.i.o.n
Then I came to believe
It would ALL come TRUE
Just have faith in me
Never forget me
And if need be…
Let go and we will find one another
In the place we ran to
In the Land Of “Dreams Do Come True”
I’ll bring the passion
If you bring the heat
I’ll keep your secret
If you keep mine
I’ll hold you until I draw
From my last breath,
I withheld it for you
I gave you my last kiss and said
My goodbyes
Only to forget my last words:
“I love you, you saved me, I love you, till eternity.”

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© 2006 Caught the Bullet!
Published on Sunday, July 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: yeah.. this is just simply amazing..crazy amazing.. your words.. they really bring hope to us all, you write with all the conviction of your being.... it might have been your intention, but I'll still say it, you made me believe in every word.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Thursday, June 19, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    I'm going to have to agree with miss K_Love on this one. You speak as I think, but I could never say the words. All a big flow of emotional truth this seems like, and not hiding behind a million poetic metaphors and images. This is raw and yet poetic for the form and flow that you always capture. Reading this, I can tell you that You did tell me, and I do believe you. One hell of a love expressed here, and I do love that title. Write on...

  • K_Love On Wednesday, July 26, 2006, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    It certainly is beautiful. One of the best you've ever written, maybe even the best. Soft spoken, hard hitting.

  • A former member wrote: pure and beautiful. "I love you, you saved me... ahh damn.

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