My Dear

By ashottothetemple

I'm rarely sure of anything

But of this one thing I'm sure

I couldn't live without you

Before you, my whole life's been a blur


I need your voice

To comfort my broken heart

And I hope I'll always have you

Even when my life does fall apart



I'll need your touch

It makes me quiver inside

More intoxicating than blood

To know we've nothing left to hide


I'll need your kiss

To smile in hard times

And when I can bear no more

To bring remembrance of these lines


For you I'd do anything

And I know you would, too

Because this true love is worth it

I'll be here for you through and through


You remind me

Of who I always wanted to be

But never had the courage

To be free and let people see


That I can survive

But I'll need you with me

Because without you

I'd die plain and simply


Just one last verse

For my baby girl

I love everything about you

And you are my world!!

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Copyright 2004 Spirett
Published on Sunday, August 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Saturday, December 24, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Just beauitiful. . . .

  • wicked flesh On Monday, November 6, 2006, wicked flesh (22)By person wrote:

    So beautiful and touching. Love is fantastic.

  • bloody LOVEly On Sunday, July 17, 2005, bloody LOVEly (85)By person wrote:

    what a passionate write. it's beautiful to see that such love can exist.

  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, June 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Great write. Enjoyed the ending. :p ~*~Tart~*~

  • blue On Thursday, November 25, 2004, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    rather soothing. nice piece. B.

  • A former member wrote: i love this one!

  • A former member wrote: stunning, very touching write. well done

  • Zhee On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    absolutely beautiful...!

  • A former member wrote: Ooh, it's my poem. *sniffle* I love this one with all of my heart.

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