Comments by All Members
- "glad t5o C. a small implement of positive reaction ... let us play on the freeways .... very well done, much respect "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Incomplete" by diavolessa
- "that`s exactly what i feel about that society, too. hate that rat race... luckily i stepped off it before it was too late... feeling much better now when being just me! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Brainwashed society" by diavolessa
- "yes, yes, yes... this is truely an inspiring & hard piece...i love the street metaphors and use of words: "Like the broken windows of a car: roads that hug the bitter rain," i can feel and hear the breaking heart on cracked pavements... peonage ..."
Posted by Unknown on "TIME: 09:43" by diavolessa
- "I've left my guitar with broken strings for far too long, yet it is my Rebecca and I will treasure it always"
Posted by SageoPhoneus on "Incomplete" by diavolessa
- "AWESOME i relly got into it.this piece was meant to be read with some morbid
effects, specially when M starts having
visions & fashbacks right b4 he dies.Great story"
Posted by Unknown on "Prison T" by diavolessa
- "This is a fabulous piece! There are so many great lines in this one, like "But you, doctor, have other patients" and "Drown the sea so it can never give me back a sunset", "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Crying for myself..." by diavolessa
- "i know its still abstract. it hasn't got a form yet. i think i may add an other part to it today. depends on the muse tho! :)"
Posted by diavolessa on "Prison T" by diavolessa
- "kinda makes me wish i knew wtf you were talking about lol but still i like your style of writing."
Posted by Unknown on "Prison T" by diavolessa
- ""stubborn that we are!” he said
I did not listen! "
and
“I would have been better if we were
sun and moon,” he said
“so we would have never met!”
so perfect!!!!q
"
Posted by Jonas on "Sun and MooN" by diavolessa
- "i still kinda like the flow. gangs of rabid vermin crawled all over europe and a cloud of death sweapt away the deserving and undeserving alike... that's just my impression, not interpretation"
Posted by Jonas on "Brainwashed society" by diavolessa
- "at least so far (and this will probably hold) this is my absolute favourite... you pour the glistening truths of love and long gone down the road into a twisting city of poetical goodness"
Posted by Jonas on "Memoirs of a psychopath 1" by diavolessa
- "'ain't no sunshine when she's gone and she's always gone too long every time she goes away'"
Posted by Jonas on "TIME: 09:43" by diavolessa
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