Comments by All Members
- "Clever wording . i didnt directly see the subliminal shield that you hung over this poem ... but im sure tonite while im sleeping, it will crawl up into my conscience an scare me .. Beautiful work "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "A ticket, please..." by diavolessa
- "ah, a delightful pronouned discriptive emotional trap, consealed in an unsealed box of marbles floating into an empty sheet of plastic memories folded ,... nice
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Posted by DoctorAsh on "Did you know...?" by diavolessa
- ""There was a scream I could hear
And the ring bearer of destiny
Married fate told me to stop"
i love those lines
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Posted by Twilight on "Incomplete" by diavolessa
- "ah ... one more to add the favs .. what a good stronge pointer finger you have .. push it hard into they're eyes until they bleed buckets of nothing .. sit on a stool and laugh ... wonderful write
"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "The power of NOTHING" by diavolessa
- "Don't bother...he's been attacking nearly everything he's read, I'm suprised Dark Sister got off with a good comment..but then again, she's good..."
Posted by Unknown on "The power of NOTHING" by diavolessa
- "By this, should a sympathetic tear be shed? Mercy for your endeavors- that the rubber and
herbal tea made you fuck a dead body. But your summary of ‘NOTHING’ is far from
substantial, for rectifying review, or ‘be enlighten.’"
Posted by Unknown on "The power of NOTHING" by diavolessa
- "ooh... powerful piece of work... liked the first stanza "This world is too empty of love/For he who knows how to hate" that's great... as soon as I decide to send matt a postcard... you make my favourites"
Posted by Unknown on "The power of NOTHING" by diavolessa
- "i thought i had commented on this one already but since i haven't i shall do so now....good write in structure and thought. I like the positive stance the poem takes..also like the way it was titled. Good write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Incomplete" by diavolessa
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