Comments by All Members
- "you have touched me deeply, your quandry and search for truth within humanity and nature, and internal direction........your words make me realize there are others with humility and concerned wonderment........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "The Eternal Movement..." by diavolessa
- "yes, as you say, "
Rivers continues…"
Denile, Euphartes, the Mississippi, black river, river of dreams, rivers of love, lonely rivers, rivers of blood, rivers of sanctuary... forever, these rivers flow, as the rivers of time..."
Posted by Unknown on "Rivers" by diavolessa
- "This piece was a little too scattered for me. I also had trouble making a connection to the realism behind the words. It maybe just me though. Keep posting!"
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "glass realm" by diavolessa
- ""To stain your flesh with my fragility." Oh so wonderful! Well done, I love the idea behind this one!"
Posted by Unknown on "glass realm" by diavolessa
- "its magic how you took these words and transformed them into such quiet beauty. i could see the story unfold. it flowed so well. beautifully done.
-moon"
Posted by celestine_moon on "raped moon" by diavolessa
- ""a raped moon takes her walk"...there is so much to say in this poem...every line is alone beautiful and remarkable...gotta love the moon...inspirational and raped in ur eyes..great, great write."
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "raped moon" by diavolessa
- "this is jusp plain beautiful my friend. It's fragile but strong at the same time. I like the way you put it! good stuff"
Posted by Unknown on "glass realm" by diavolessa
- "ooo .... i likie, I LIKIE; Its like the very first bite into a freshly baked piece of brand new yummie happy pizzia: Yummie Write: [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "glass realm" by diavolessa
- "Only a dreamer could write something of this nature. It's good to know there are others out there. The last line effectively personalizes the piece, which really helped suck me in. Keep it up!"
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "This [D]esire o[f] [L]o[V]e" by diavolessa
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