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- "comming from the deepest part of you, it seems, showing us your true and untainted self, your words of sad beauty, your ancient voice, giving life to despair......well done well said...urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "....b.e.f.o.r.e the sun set" by diavolessa
- "volio esere reincarnata una farfalla- was my favorite line. I don't know what it means, but if someone was to whisper it in my ear I would get really turned on. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "....b.e.f.o.r.e the sun set" by diavolessa
- "Beautiful write as always ... and goddamn .... the lines "tears that dry on the surface of a dream" took away my virginity once again. [Purple thoughts] Lovely Read. [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "....b.e.f.o.r.e the sun set" by diavolessa
- ""no love can be this cursed, no thought can be this troubled…" Great lines. I love this poem. Line for line I’m going through a similar situation as we speak. Good luck the image of the way love should be.
Thanks,
~PB~
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Posted by pushblood on "time of [absence]" by diavolessa
- "Great piece - I especially loved "I supply myself on dreams
I pull them by the hair, break their bones
and grasp the light that diffuses your hallucinating love" - I could really feel those lines. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "time of [absence]" by diavolessa
- "The splinters and dreams of your mind come together in this piece to create the single most wonderful piece I've read today. Great write."
Posted by SageoPhoneus on "time of [absence]" by diavolessa
- "This is a scream in my head. It made me breath as i had just ran the 100 meter. It made me angry and at the same time i felt high. All i can say is ...WAOUW! diavolessa this is a fist in my face, and i love it!"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Sadness" by diavolessa
- ""your last word was 'autumn'" Immediately, w/ this first line, I was captured by the raw beauty of this cinema poem There is a splendid rhythm to your style. Bravo!"
Posted by Unknown on "raped moon" by diavolessa
- "You have taught me to love again. In a vision; in a dream: warm as spring or the touch of another, fragile as blown glass or a glimpse of the truth, patient as eternity or the sureness of sadness yet to come."
Posted by Stranger on "time of [absence]" by diavolessa
- "you have captured my soul with your words, where do you find the words that filter through your mind, you have described the place where haunted memory resides.......words so pure......urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "time of [absence]" by diavolessa
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