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"...good call..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"lol"
Posted by TheReap on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"This is crazy! I love it! Bethany"
Posted by Soulseeker on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"that was great - i couldn't stop smiling - kinda Dr Suessish"
Posted by mysticventures on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"I agree with Darun, once I started I couldn't stop reading. Funny as hell!"
Posted by Rebirth on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"that was enlightning...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"yeah, i realized the rhyming was off, but i couldnt get it to do so without losing some of the humor...so, i figured that was more important =) *krystal*"
Posted by GirlintheBox on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"...ah, okay...I think I'm finished; rhyme was a bit off at times, but who fucking cares...? this was hilarious to the point that one has to finish reading...nicely done... -Darun"
Posted by SilentStalker on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"*still rolling*"
Posted by SilentStalker on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"Nice. must have sucked lol :) -BT-"
Posted by Whisper on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"rofl"
Posted by SilentStalker on "This Morning I Stepped in a Pile of Poo" by GirlintheBox

"The flow and the words went together as if it was meant to be. Beautiful write, I feel as if you've written a story instead of a poem. I enjoyed this great write! ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"Do not fret young one, life is easier to change after 18...trust me I remember the same feelings when I was your age...another wonderful write..."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"The most bleak out look of numbness, awesome piece.."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "You Say" by GirlintheBox

"Wonderful metaphors...keep it up"
Posted by Blood of Winter on "Masterpiece" by GirlintheBox

"i enjoyed this, it seemed fresh in a way,i liked the imagery and the idea of the lion, impressive"
Posted by Anth on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"i think a lot of us have are own lion in our lives...this piece was full of power and emotion, very good write here -wake"
Posted by inthewakeofshadows on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"The way Assonance just rolls of the tongue is wonderful, you really did well with that one."
Posted by Rebirth on "You Say" by GirlintheBox

"I agree with serpentine, the rhyme works well in this piece and it flowed really well. And the Lion being sort of a trap is great. Good write."
Posted by Rebirth on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"very vivid...nice write! -wake"
Posted by inthewakeofshadows on "Crimson Feelings" by GirlintheBox

"I'm in awe. this is a powerful write. -BT-"
Posted by Whisper on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"wow, catch 22 was an impressive write...i enjoyed the meaning behind it & every word. welcome to DP :) -MeL-"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "Catch Twenty-Two" by GirlintheBox

"very powerful...I like the lion idea...great write- michelle"
Posted by AHHH on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"this is a great piece. the rhyme and and the flow of this was perfect. Awesome imagery. good job ~serpentine~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Overdose (Journey to Hell) revised" by GirlintheBox

"Lovely flow to this piece - I also like the ending very much, soul buried, but you, apparently, live on without it. Nice imagery! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Crimson Feelings" by GirlintheBox

"These are all fantastic! My favourite line out of three poems worth of great lines is "The guilt you should feel is weighing me down". Look forward to reading more of yours in the future. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Fade Away" by GirlintheBox

"I like your style of writing. good write and welcome to Dp. ~serpentine~"
Posted by Unknown on "Crimson Feelings" by GirlintheBox

"I absolutely love this write. -BT-"
Posted by Whisper on "You Say" by GirlintheBox

"I like the way it degraded to a kind of it's already done feeling..."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "Crimson Feelings" by GirlintheBox

"Nice write. I like your style. hope you don't mind if I add you to my favorites. -BT-"
Posted by Whisper on "Masterpiece" by GirlintheBox

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