Masterpiece

By GirlintheBox

So long lingering for love
While accepting merely lust
The heart continues to cry out
For compassion
A desire overwhelming
For a gentle touch and kiss
That takes away the torment
If only temporary
Perhaps a time will come
when fate will smile downward
And lavish gifts
Of romance everlasting
Perhaps that time has come
A remedy for the pain
That has so long slowly
Slaughtered the soul
the pieces of the puzzle
In original form returning
As hope comes forth from
Years of desolation
The puzzle now complete
A delicate masterpiece
Which must be handled with
The greatest of care
For if it is once more shattered
In this form it shall remain
And the existence of the masterpiece
No more
Then hope will hide forever
A cause to love shall die
And the soul become home to bitterness

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Copyright 2004 Krystal Bray
Published on Tuesday, August 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow this one is beautiful..

  • Grim_Sorrow On Friday, April 22, 2005, Grim_Sorrow (74)By person wrote:

    Well Done... You Are Now one Of My Favorites...

  • TheReap On Friday, August 13, 2004, TheReap (38)By person wrote:

    wow this one hit me hard

  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, August 5, 2004, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    Wonderful metaphors...keep it up

  • Whisper On Wednesday, August 4, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    Nice write. I like your style. hope you don't mind if I add you to my favorites. -BT-

  • A former member wrote: Whatever your heart wishes for, I hope you receive it, at least, someday.

  • A former member wrote: "For if it is once more shattered In this form it shall remain And the existence of the masterpiece No more" i loved that part, a masterpeice here indeed, best of oyurs i've read so far, excellent.

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