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  • "nice, and I agree, I think the title fits. People often think they can just step in and manipulate our thougts and lives...."
    Posted by Unknown on "cucumbers" by GirlintheBox
  • "well done, and who wants to be one of those stereotypical happy folk, if it means being a slave, following the trends and such like a sheep."
    Posted by Lord Kalgalath on "musings" by GirlintheBox
  • "A mantra is what I would called it yes yes it would it would, beautiful thank you for sharing. -Munkey-"
    Posted by Munkey on "Assonance" by GirlintheBox
  • ""All thats left is a whisper of past feelings and the longing to feel once again one day" I know how you feel. -Munkey-"
    Posted by Munkey on "Anorex" by GirlintheBox
  • "I know how you feel all those who put others down aren't worth the pile of poo that you stepped in. ;) -Munkey-"
    Posted by Munkey on "Murder my Fire" by GirlintheBox
  • "very effective pounding slow beat to this, like a mantra almost, internal chant... the first stanza is my favourite. :) fine write!"
    Posted by purr_verse on "Assonance" by GirlintheBox
  • "I like this piece a lot. I think people who write on this level at such a young age are old souls. Parts of me remember what it was like to feel like this--very nice, clear expression"
    Posted by Northstar on "musings" by GirlintheBox
  • "i would have to agree with Solace. haha. being alone is very fun, usually. nicely written though. awesome work."
    Posted by Unknown on "musings" by GirlintheBox
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