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Girl in the Box
By GirlintheBox
trapped in a world of
two
dimensions
i've lost all
sense of
reality
the world is
spinning
constantly
im thrown around by
vertigo
this box is growing smaller
i can't breathe
i'm choking on this fear that i'm
dying
and this is the
only
world
i
know
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Copyright 2004 Krystal Bray
Published on Tuesday, August 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Girl in the Box"
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A former member wrote:
Deep and astonishing!
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A former member wrote:
wow... so true...
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On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Savannah
(218)
wrote:
OMG! I swear, I know exactly how you feel, dear. I really do..
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, thecitymorgue
(37) wrote:
"and this is the only world that i know"...soooo many times i have felt the same reality. you write well. you painted a picture of growing despair here and you did it well in just a few lines. you do indeed write very well.
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
I stand in your shadow. *bows* :) ~Whisper~
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