Comments by All Members
- "brutal and very intense! good work again."
Posted by AMIEVEEL on "OD" by Zhee
- "Amieveel is right! It does get better & better, & as you know, I'm always looking forward to it. ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "Desert In My Eyes..." by Zhee
- "I'm reminded of Stephen King's "GREEN MILE" w/this write. The character John Coffee is who I'm thinking of, because of the movie w/ Tom Hanks. John Coffee says something about pieces of glass inside his head. OUCH! Wonderful work."
Posted by Unknown on "THE SILENCE..." by Zhee
- "I've never heard of this disease, but am grateful you have enlightened me. It seemed a cross between Tourette's Syndrome & Parkinson's disease combined."
Posted by Unknown on "LEWY BODY DISEASE" by Zhee
- "With your words, once you put 'em down, you're never lost! Your heart & soul & sanity are found! ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "BLEEDING WORDS" by Zhee
- ""Deafened by razor blade screams." I'm hearing them now. I'll shut off my hearing aids. "Through the serene opiate dreams." I'm reminded of my father's travels in Vietnam & Hong Kong. Difficult, but enjoyable. ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "OD" by Zhee
- "Crushing stuff, defeated, conceded...like defining a moment alone in silence, but inside theres screaming..."
Posted by Solace on "Blighted Within" by Zhee
- "I feel this and understand it. good write! StrongC"
Posted by Unknown on "FILTH" by Zhee
- "This peice is so full of defeat, yet it still remains so beautiful. You've done a great job with this one; the words you've chosen to tell the story fit together so nicely."
Posted by Zara Synn on "Blighted Within" by Zhee
- ""There is no heaven,
This drug is lying." awesome lines. i believe thay were th eglue fusing this piece together. a twist is you will. of the measures you go to for an alternate reality.
"
Posted by Twilight on "Blighted Within" by Zhee
- "It seemed obvious at first this poem, and it still does to the eye, but the true effect of the words are one step behind of the eye. I am glad I came here. -Nadir-"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Blighted Within" by Zhee
- "Zhee the way you connect these words is disturbing beyond words. Not in a "I am going to freak in two seconds!" kind of way. But in a saddening, slowly darkening way. Where I am one step behind every word."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Blighted Within" by Zhee
- "When I think of this poem, I envision 2 words in my head, "blood money.""
Posted by Unknown on "The Altar" by Zhee
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