OD

By Zhee

Eroded – Pain lies permeated,
Corroding the self that exists,
Promises of release reflected
Down the bloody splintered wrists.

Fractured – the memories bleed
On to the flesh, bruised and torn,
Cradling the pristine dreams
Slaughtered, yet never born.

Displaced – malice now parades
Cherished in the disguised vial,
Protected in the silhouettes
Of the enshrouded denial.

Wasted – the fragile self crumbles,
Deafened by razor blade screams,
Impetus of the vortex transcends
Through the serene opiate dreams....

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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Monday, September 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Angst Queen On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    brutal write, most of yours are i've noticed, but i love them none the less

  • A former member wrote: "Deafened by razor blade screams." I'm hearing them now. I'll shut off my hearing aids. "Through the serene opiate dreams." I'm reminded of my father's travels in Vietnam & Hong Kong. Difficult, but enjoyable. ~Shane~

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