Comments by All Members
- "Wow, indeed ~ "I turn on the light and put down the blade Look at the marks of my own hate I love the pain you do not know But I cry when I remember I was always alone" ~ exquisite and saddening in a strangely enchanting way. ~ Rose."
Posted by Unknown on "Masochistic Tendencies" by Blyss Rayne
- "Whoa, kinda left me with a lack of words, something I don't often lack...very well done to say the very least."
Posted by Ideas on "Isn't It Funny" by Blyss Rayne
- "i had wanted to name a favorite stanza or sentence, but i ended up saying this- i love the whole fricking piece. wonderfully written,blyss! u have outdone yourself here. awesome. -MeL-"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "Isn't It Funny" by Blyss Rayne
- "This is a great idea, and again it holds alot. Ill suggest making an ending after "(i want to tell you i love you)". So that it work in form, with two poems, and two endings.
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Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "He Is You" by Blyss Rayne
- "I dont know what there is to ever show such a girl. Most likely she have seen it all allready. The question remain ,what she realy want for. Being real maybe, feeling real. That takes alot, and sometimes only a little."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "All Dolled Up" by Blyss Rayne
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