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When My Heart Broke
By Blyss Rayne
When I fell
Did you help me up?
When I cried
Did you dry my tears?
When I shook
Did you steady my hand?
When I screamed
Did you fight my fears?
When I was alone
I was in your company
When I screamed
It was you who scared me
When my tears fell
It was you who shed them
When my heart broke
You left it there to bleed
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Copyright 2004 Taylor Hunt
Published on Wednesday, June 9, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, June 13, 2004, SilencedAngel
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wrote:
wow this reminds me of my horror with my ex....you captured everything perfectly...good work
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
yea, when my heart broke, he left it there to bleed indeed...u spoke the words from my heart... nice piece, i could relate to it now. welcome 2 DP. -MeL-
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
*favorites this*
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