All Dolled Up

By Blyss Rayne

A young girl stands in a corner of a dim room, all alone.
she's beautiful,
in a bizaar,
sad sort of way.
there's a sadness in her eyes that isn't within grasp,
yet without it she wouldn't be whole.
she wouldn't stay sane.
Her tears would be full of anger and pain and guilt and lies.
But without them she just wouldn't be
...her.
she would have no identity
...no purpose to keep breathing.
she paints her face to hide the reality,
but i can see it in her eyes.
It's a bitter lonliness.
waiting to be released.
She's all dolled up and no place to go,
and no one to take her.
she forgot how to believe in happy endings.

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Copyright 2004 Blyss Rayne
Published on Saturday, June 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i love this poem and i understand where the girl is coming from! ~Windish~

  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, March 21, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Sadly, this happens all too often. Great write and great portrayal of hope/or lack thereof. ~*~Tart~*~

  • vaultgrl On Thursday, June 16, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ....wonderful....I love it and feel her loneliness

  • SilencedAngel On Sunday, June 13, 2004, SilencedAngel (52)By person wrote:

    wow....makes me speechless...wow

  • KittyStryker On Saturday, June 12, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    the last three lines make this poem quietly intense.

  • glasshouse On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Agree. Great write here. I really liked it. -Glass

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, June 12, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    I dont know what there is to ever show such a girl. Most likely she have seen it all allready. The question remain ,what she realy want for. Being real maybe, feeling real. That takes alot, and sometimes only a little.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, June 12, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    She dosnt scare me though. I like this poem, I think it shows alot. Tiger

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