Masochistic Tendencies

By Blyss Rayne

The room is dim
Lit only by candles
On my satin-sheeted bed
Ecstacy rising
It hurts
Feel so good
Do it again
Dont stop
I feel so good
So free
Dont stop
Dont EVER stop
Oh, GOD!
The pain
Its so invigorating
So HOT
Cut my arm
Right your name
Let it bleed

I turn on the light and put down the blade
Look at the marks of my own hate

I love the pain you do not know
But I cry when I remember I was always alone...

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Copyright 2004 Taylor Hunt
Published on Wednesday, June 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: depressing, erotic, I like it (hurts)...

  • A former member wrote: Wow, indeed ~ "I turn on the light and put down the blade Look at the marks of my own hate I love the pain you do not know But I cry when I remember I was always alone" ~ exquisite and saddening in a strangely enchanting way. ~ Rose.

  • SilencedAngel On Sunday, June 13, 2004, SilencedAngel (52)By person wrote:

    this one reminds me of a friend of mine...i really liked this one

  • Clementine On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, Clementine (121)By person wrote:

    canopy's suck

  • Blyss Rayne On Friday, June 11, 2004, Blyss Rayne (9)By person wrote:

    excuse you?

  • Arsonick On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, Arsonick (6)By person wrote:

    Wow. This is incredible. I really like the last two lines. Well done.

  • aXe FactoR On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    nice write on this, saw ya profile, ur a fellow christian like me, & im also morbid,*slaps u a high five*...similar situations,hee hee, but i'm dark,dark &dark, seldom light. lol -MeL-

  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    an unfourtunate realization, a well spoken poem..........well done........urban

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