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- "wow. Hammer. Wow.
makes me want to write more. reminds me of a line in HOWL, "Who were expelled from the academies for crazy, and publishing obscene odes on the windows of the skull"
great write."
Posted by What Limes on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- ""A poet's heart
Romanticized,
A canvas to create..." Sometimes poems are just poetry; words like colourful paints splashed on art canvas boards. This could be a love poem, it could be merely the art of poetry. I have my thoughts, but in the end, I like"
Posted by Unknown on "Fog City" by glasshouse
- ""And the river only screams To everyone In ink running down his fingers." So many trains, so many life tracks... sins & inspirations. We can stand forever waiting for trains, & forget why we are waiting even when the trains find our platforms, our..."
Posted by Unknown on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- "...tunnels. Tunnels like rivers: the thoughts. Forced despite the screams; rains, abandonment, dry. There is much vivid thought in this poem, stripped & strangely September. It breathes something more while it bleeds of its muse. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- "...where i could speak love, if only as a character...and know you truly felt the act....this is one of the most deeply woven pieces you've written....you once said i write for you, darling, you're the one who writes...for me. "
Posted by sIo on "Accolades Relinquished (The Making of an Effigy)" by glasshouse
- "Imaginative and well written. I like the word play that you used in this. Very much a great piece of poetry."
Posted by Unknown on "Fog City" by glasshouse
- "Yes we certainly cannot control ourself on some specific tracks... okey *head spins* got it!(I think) that is great. Clever written with the examples and all. Now I need sleep! "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- "And now I forgot what point it had... *re-reads*.... Hmm love the whole thing about forcing thoughts. Ahh yes the point was that I think about the wise girl when I take my own thoughts too serius, and/or try and force them."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- "when I say that she was five years old. But it is the truth, and her ability to think abstract was incredible. Okey I must have told this to everyone by now..."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- "I once asked a smart(okey smart does not cover it) little girl what eternity was. She said: "Eternity is your thoughts, becouse they just keeps going round and round". Now you will not believe me"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- "right now i wish i had the words, but this requires a vast amount of reads and re-reads to even begin typing so much as a space on this piece...."
Posted by sIo on "Of Trains [I Digress]" by glasshouse
- "such a surreal and nearly insanely aloof; thoughtful, interlocking oppostionally defiant piece. .. . a mad pied piper calling~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Ostrich Syndrome" by glasshouse
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