A Romance Between Two Hearts of Stone Can Only Produce Sparks

By glasshouse







The union
Of two stubborn souls
Conceives loss

And loss is born
Of its ethereal canal






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© 2007 glasshouse
Published on Thursday, March 1, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i love the title

  • A former member wrote: we find comfort in finding similarities. even if it's a losing battle

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, September 22, 2007, carlosjackal (3014)By person wrote:

    Knockout poetic brevity. And that title is mindblowing :) -Carl

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, June 16, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    *wind kicks* Just four words more then the title.. was great to read

  • A former member wrote: so much pain in so few words.the title is sharp

  • Six-Out On Thursday, March 1, 2007, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    ouch. sorry to read this, but glad at the same time. you weave words wonderfully.

  • Mylissa On Thursday, March 1, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    this makes me want to take your pain away. beautiful.

  • sIo On Thursday, March 1, 2007, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    sadness....no sadness....

  • Lynaes On Thursday, March 1, 2007, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    The title is utter genius. This was sad Jes.. hope you're okay love.

  • glasshouse On Thursday, March 1, 2007, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    I'm doing just fine, deary. Don't you worry about me.

  • Lynaes On Thursday, March 1, 2007, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    *hugs*

  • Lynaes On Friday, March 2, 2007, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    dp mail me anytime.

  • A former member wrote: this is quite brilliant..sharp, gorgeous, perfect.

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