Comments by All Members
- "what sentiment behind these dark words. i got such a chill that my teeth chattered. "As I slip back into A cold Dark Reality You're no longer here..." such bitter honesty it hurts."
Posted by Unknown on "To feel you within" by Kfritz
- "Wonderous..."With those brutal/Empty words/We said.../And the immature lies/I told..." You have taken a story I know inside and out and made it into a melting pot of gold. Beautiful imagery, even more magnificent lesson. I love it. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Stare at me" by Kfritz
- "This has a very succinct presence... a glimpse of just one instant- like a photograph... it may be unfinished but it is marvelously complete"
Posted by ShadowFlight on "clouds falling" by Kfritz
- "you get right to the point, in a very descriptive way. very good. i can relate. nice job"
Posted by AniDayz on "porcelain doll" by Kfritz
- "This happens too much now a days, I feel the sadness and my sympathy goes out to everyone who has been through this."
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "the child" by Kfritz
- "My favorite stanza here is, "I don't want to be the me you see, so I'll stand up and walk out." Excellent. Always reassert yourself when you can."
Posted by Unknown on "Who I am" by Kfritz
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