Hoping

By Kfritz

Candle flickers
And shadows dance upon the wall
The smoke flies out the window
As rain jumps onto the sill
The roof above me creaks from squirrels
I know youre out there
Somewhere out there still
I’m waiting for your call
Maybe the lines are down
I’m waiting for my cell
To ring in the sweet tone
I set up for only you
The squirrels still run in the roof
The rain still hits hard
And the shadows dance in hope
That you are one your way home

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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Thursday, July 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Frightfully delightful poem, this! ~Shane~

  • Northstar On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    I love the longing expressed here

  • Soulseeker On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    Great play of words... I really liked this one! Bethany

  • A former member wrote: awesome description. really enchanting. i love it.

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