Comments by All Members
- "I have wrote a few works that are all in my imagination. They sound so good and real in our heads, but when reality hits it hurts a lot!...lol Don't stop dreaming though, cuz without dreams what would lead us on?"
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "The Love I Imagined" by Simply Me
- "Well it's not really supposed to seem like it's her fault for getting beat throughout her marriage but that it's his fault she turned to another man."
Posted by Simply Me on "The Wedding Photo" by Simply Me
- "Yes I have tried all kinds of different rhyme schemes, this is actually the fist time I've written one where the end of every line rhymes."
Posted by Simply Me on "The Wedding Photo" by Simply Me
- "Man can I relate!!! I am in an open relationship, and if your guys would wake up and realize if they accept each other, neither has to lose you, but hey no one understands openness, great write."
Posted by Unknown on "So She Cries For Both" by Simply Me
- "i would have to agree with apathy she did have the affair .. but other then that really really good write .. i liked it .. :) ~*blackroses*~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Wedding Photo" by Simply Me
- "I agree, this is an extremely powerful write. Even those who haven't experienced this kind of pain can clearly see what it's about. Most excellent peice!"
Posted by Zara Synn on "The Wedding Photo" by Simply Me
- "Whoa.. I think this is a very powerful write. Lot of thought and pain. Personally, I like the rhyming, I think it adds to the piece. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "The Wedding Photo" by Simply Me
- ""Lift me high above the clouds,
and melt this heart of ice.
The aching cold will kill me slow,
So please release me from its vice."
i know the feeling great write! *hott*
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Posted by icyhott on "Sinking Fast" by Simply Me
- ""I'm already out of tears" - v.powerful line. I love the way hopelessness eis xpressed in the poem, while at the same time there is a strong sense of hope. ~ Psychotic"
Posted by Unknown on "I'm already Out Of Tears" by Simply Me
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