My Painted Castle

By Simply Me

If I paint my castle in the sky,
could I paint you with me too?
I'll paint it in the clouds so high,
no one could find me there with you.

I'll paint us happy all the time,
the world left down below.
We'll be living in my masterpiece,
and the rest will never know.

You'll be my prince of nothingness,
no need for fortune and fame.
No one to tell us how to live,
and no more childish games.

Simply me and simply you,
forever just you and I.
Forget the hurting and the pain,
there'll be no need to cry.

So I invite you to my painted castle,
I promise to make it just right.
Everything you've ever wanted,
my paint brush won't deny.

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Copyright 2004 Simply Me
Published on Monday, July 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow this was beautiful. i loved it and i wish happiness was made with some paint. i would be the happiesnt person aliove..but then again whats life without pain?

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, July 19, 2004, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    if happiness could be painted with words i would say u are already in that castle, "there'll be no need to cry" *bows*

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