I'm already Out Of Tears

By Simply Me

I'm not in a place of comfort,
like where I used to be.
Some how life got twisted,
and it's just too much for me.

I wasn't designed for this load
and my arms are getting weak.
I need to scream for help,
but I'm too numb to speak.

My knees are beginning to buckle,
and I'm falling to the ground.
You said you'd help me through this,
but you're no where around.

Please come back to pick me up,
cause I can't do it on my own.
Please help me now, I'm scared,
and I shouldn't be left alone.

I remember all your promises,
like music to my ears.
Don't let me down again my love,
I'm already out of tears.

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Copyright 2004 Rebecca Geary
Published on Monday, July 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i like this

  • A former member wrote: this was amazing... breath taking grate job

  • A former member wrote: "I'm already out of tears" - v.powerful line. I love the way hopelessness eis xpressed in the poem, while at the same time there is a strong sense of hope. ~ Psychotic

  • Northstar On Monday, July 19, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    very nice--you express here emotions that I can definitely relate to.

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, July 19, 2004, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    reminds me of days past and tears tahat were never allowd to be cried, works like this are the reason i came to this place beautiful job

  • glasshouse On Monday, July 19, 2004, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    Wow. This piece hurt. A lot. The second and last stanzas especially. I like this alot. It flowed well and I felt every word deeply. I've felt this piece so many days, I love it. Great work. -Glass

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