Save Me From You
By Simply Me
Save Me From You
I've let you talk me into something.
Must've let my defenses down.
I thought I was in complete control,
and I'd be the one who wore the crown.
Thought I was being cautious,
but my insecurities let you in.
Put all my trust in your strong hands,
and now my weakness made me sin.
You glorified the bad in me,
and somehow I felt complete.
I felt like I could rule the world,
even if I had to cheat.
I've got myself in trouble now,
and you're lovin what that means.
I've gotta get away some how,
and I don't wanna be your queen.
I don't know why I love you,
or why I've let you take control.
Now I depend on you to tell me,
how only you can make me whole.
I'll never get away from you,
no matter how hard I try.
I can't stand to have you in my life,
but without out you I will die.
Comments on "Save Me From You"
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A former member wrote:
I love it.
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A former member wrote:
wow.. I love your writtings. Ther hold so much pain and power.. wow
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A former member wrote:
this... is where I live inside of myself right now, you spoke it so well.~A~
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On Friday, November 4, 2005, MidSummers Eve
(38) wrote:
love the rythm, and the complex contradictory emotions, well done.
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On Saturday, January 8, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
very emotional piece here, i have felt like that before and it hurts as well as confuses, great job ~Emptynesss~
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, PointlessX
(36) wrote:
the last 2 verse hit me hard--this poem hurts me deep inside--great write!!--PointlessX
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
As always, a pleasure to read. Awesome.
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On Tuesday, September 7, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
how come everything that's bad for us always tastes so good? nice write.
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On Tuesday, September 7, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
nice flow ;)
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On Tuesday, September 7, 2004, Dommi
(95) wrote:
oh wow this was great... loved the flow and loved the words more. excellent work. :)