Comments by All Members
- "this was remarkably good... I liked how it flowed and the metaphors you used. Nice work."
Posted by lordshadow on "untitled" by forbidden
- "mmmkay. i thought the title was well fitting. maybe thats me. i love the first line. grabs the reader. great write"
Posted by physicalgraffiti on "How Many?" by forbidden
- "very well written.. . really liked the way you described this..."
Posted by Zhee on "The Wall" by forbidden
- "very good...makes me feel a sence of frustration and love for thoughts that are sometimes so confusing...exelent write..."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "How Many?" by forbidden
- "Ok... I'm gonna be honest... its a good piece. And I like it... but you got lucky that I even read it since you put that in the title. Few people here will. Have some confidence in your stuff and be yourself. Thats all we expect. Nice piece. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "How Many?" by forbidden
- "three letter word, compressed into three lines...seems ironic for a being that appears so universal...(mischevious smile) hehehe..."
Posted by missanthropic on "God" by forbidden
- "_exactly...people are so afraid to just scrap all of the excuses and go it on their own...it's really sad more than anything else....pathetic.thanx,man."
Posted by suicideseason on "God" by forbidden
- "any more i see god as the ignorant mass's explenation for the unexplainable,their crutch just so they can feel safe. -Marshall"
Posted by forbidden on "God" by forbidden
- "_god...what does he do?he watches us suffer...i could do that...any fucking jabrone could...i feel you.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "God" by forbidden
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