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By forbidden

come on rain,
sweet and cold.
clear my soul.
lift me up,
so i can fall,
right back down.
time is sacred,
time is holy.
oh come on kid,
just walk this way.
tear me up,
unmake me slowly.
throw me down,
to fate so coldly.
stop, just sit a bit
move up closer.
time can't heal,
what you've created.
steal, and jagged pane,
can't cut much deeper
hey baby wait,
it'll all be over,
just take this pill.
love comes in many shapes,
forms and colors.
call it by the brand,
or weary travler,
claim it falsely.
it matters none,
that name you bear.
what matters most,
is that you,
take this hand,
and fall.
come back down
and slide into my dreams.

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Copyright 2004 forbidden
Published on Monday, November 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Crimsonrose On Monday, September 21, 2009, Crimsonrose (9)By person wrote:

    I agree, breath taking indeed. An amazing write start to finish. Thank you for this masterpiece.

  • A former member wrote: bravo, bravo its breath taking

  • physicalgraffiti On Sunday, December 19, 2004, physicalgraffiti (56)By person wrote:

    fuck. this is what i'll miss. this great fucking poetry. READ YOUR OWN SHIT MARSH. your amazing.

  • lordshadow On Monday, November 1, 2004, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    this was remarkably good... I liked how it flowed and the metaphors you used. Nice work.

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