intangilble love

By forbidden

you are my fire
my ball and chain
that pain inside my heart
my intangible love

you're always on my mind
every waking hour i feel you
but the closer i get the harder you push
you and only you can fill the void of my dying heart

you're are my air, i need to breath
im begging you stay
once again you push
living in death, condemed by love
you are my one, my intangible love

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Copyright 2004 forbidden
Published on Monday, April 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    ~living in death, condemed by love~ this was so moving and sad ~kristy

  • Jane On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, Jane (53)By person wrote:

    Wow... beautiful!

  • physicalgraffiti On Monday, April 19, 2004, physicalgraffiti (56)By person wrote:

    those last two lines got me...*wipes tear* this one was awesome. very very nice job on this!

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