-untitled-(open for ideas)

By forbidden

i sit here waiting,
slowly dying from a broken heart
i sent my signs,
you shut the door.

my reasons for living,
ever withering,
like the hope i once held,
that we could be togather.

with each passing moment,
i become more disillusioned to the truth,
waking from my dreams,
only to realize,
i've nothing left.

my worst nightmares,
evolving into an even more horiffing reality.
the only bit of hope i hold on to,
that by shearing these asperations,
you could see the man inside.

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Copyright 2004 forbidden
Published on Saturday, July 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i just wanted to say that this entry of yours really is great none like it. thanks for putting this up!

  • DarkReality On Friday, April 1, 2005, DarkReality (7)By person wrote:

    OMG, my heart is practically bleeding. I've been there too. Great descriptions. How about Too Deep as a title?

  • A former member wrote: Good write, how about Awakening or My Dreams?

  • Whisper On Sunday, July 4, 2004, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    MISSING would be a good name but thats my opinion. I like it wish I thought of it. -Matt-

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