life

By forbidden

the arsonists fire
the extacy of true love
and the adicts high

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Copyright 2004 forbidden
Published on Monday, April 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • physicalgraffiti On Monday, April 19, 2004, physicalgraffiti (56)By person wrote:

    wow...so few words and so much emotion. *shiver* wow...

  • Beautiful Scars On Monday, April 19, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    This is awsome, I also am a fan of haikus, greatly written. -fairy-

  • ColdScaredAlone On Monday, April 19, 2004, ColdScaredAlone (77)By person wrote:

    i've always been a fan of haikus, and this one was put together well (which i know can be hard to do) the title is a good summarizer. good job, this kicks ass.

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