Comments by All Members
- "this was beautifully described.. the end was amazing..."
Posted by Zhee on "Poison" by Lifeless
- "Very cool look on "love". I can agree with it quite easily... but there is always the "other side" to this. Excellent work. -michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "We are the Living Dead" by Lifeless
- "very well-expressed; got me feeling the numbness completely. the cold echo repetition of the closure is very effective indeed. fine write."
Posted by purr_verse on "What happened?" by Lifeless
- "i am all the way with you on this one. you show no fear and that i admire you for fear is the only thing that could make all that seem petty. my hopes are with you in your quest for revival *hott*"
Posted by icyhott on "Life's Horrors (Rant)" by Lifeless
- "Wow, this was touching, in a graphic way, but still very touching. I will think twice next time i think my life is hard. great poem. †"
Posted by Unknown on "Life's Horrors (Rant)" by Lifeless
- "ok, this is mind-blowing. i have never seen 1 piece written as personal as that before. i do hope that life is treating u better now. this is very well-written, the raw truth.. -MeL-"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "Life's Horrors (Rant)" by Lifeless
- "i agree...people who cause their own problems by the choices they make have no right to complain...most of the time those of us that have problems that we did not cause don't sit around and complain about it... "
Posted by girlafraid on "Life's Horrors (Rant)" by Lifeless
- "this time of poetry is none other then unique, I love reading poetry like this with the word changing close to the end and I love this one .ds"
Posted by Unknown on "Life's Horrors (Rant)" by Lifeless
- "Man, thats alot of shit life has send your way. Alot of shit ... Life isnt even handed at all. Hope you have had more then fake smiles though, you deserve some of the real ones. Hmm your talk about forgiving ... *nods* Gave me some thoughts. "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Life's Horrors (Rant)" by Lifeless
- "i know a lot of people like this...the children suffer but so does the father..makes me wonder why the father couldn't try to avoid all of this.."
Posted by girlafraid on "Father's Day Lost" by Lifeless
- "i felt bad for you until i read the last stanza...then i smiled...very funny"
Posted by girlafraid on "Her" by Lifeless
- "ouch... the rhyme of this piece was rad... damn cool write. the ending was a bang. -MeL-"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "Her" by Lifeless
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