Thoughts after waking from a cold, dead sleep

I have a twisted sickness
For one there is no cure
You better pull that trigger
It could just save this world

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Published on Wednesday, September 1, 2004. Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Thoughts after waking from a cold, dead sleep"

On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, girlafraid (480) wrote:

ominous...that is a good word...i love short pieces that say so much...cool work.
On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, Northstar (375) wrote:

succinct poignant work here--very nicely done
On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, Syn (76) wrote:

I like...nice to see you writing again. If I would change one thing, I would take out the "just" seems it my flow a bit better, but thats just me. Short, to the point, and full of emotion. -Syn